New Charrie

1. Name: Jovan Smith
2. age:16
3. Family:None
4. Rank (Royalty, Noble, Knight, Magician, Commoner): Noble
5. Where You Live: Scotland
6. Eyes: Green
7. Skin: White
8. Hair:Red
9. Weapons:Sword
10. Pets: Horse (Beauty)
11. Biography (5 sentences): Jovan was born into a noble family in Scotland. He grew up, he was tutored in the major subjects of math, enlgish, and the sciences. He was very intelligent and learned at a very fast pace. His Parents were killed when he was 10 years old, leaving him by himself and the head of the family. He has managed to hold his own ever since. His fears include heights, and darkness
12. Rp Example (5 sentences) I grabbed my sword and enterd the arena. My teacher was waiting for me, "when you are ready we shall begin." He said. I prepared my self, and then attacked. My sword was blocked, but i twisted out and parried again. This time I hit the armour, the breastplate. My acheivement was short lived, I had to block his attack. We preacticed for about half an hour, and then it was time for my lessons. I put my sword away and washed up, then I headed to the house.
13. Notes:

okay fill it all out before I delet it

Sounds like a Gary-Stu.

How it this a Gary-Stu

Extremely smart. Probably gonna end up being good at fighting.

thers noithing wrong with being a good fighter

There's something wrong with a Gary-Stu. :/

okay im now lost

Kenny this is not a Gary-Stu

and you didnt even fill out the bio and RP example on your charrie

WE DIDNT HAVE THAT THERE THEN!! SO SHUT UP AND DONT ANGER ME ANY MORE!!!!!!!
and yeah it is. In hes Bio put that like... hes affraid of something.

OK there we go.

I hope i satisfied you guys

hm.. kenny what do you think?